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=Star Wars Jedi Apprentice Weston Goodnoe second page= =The Dark Rival= By: Weston Goodnoe

1-Qui-Gon's old apprentice Xanatous who was banished from the Jedi counscel comes back to meet with Qui-Gon to discuss a business opportunity with company called Off World. Off world is a very rich company who is known for cheating people out of their money. 2-As the they are meeting there is an explosion and one of the jedi in the meeiting get in a fight with Xanatous because they think he is the reason for the explosion. The fight is broken up and they rush down to the check on the damage. 3-They find a box with broken circle. 4- When Obi-wan and Si Treemba go to a storag building to investigate. Xanatous appears and he tricks Obi-Wan and has Off World guards take him away. 5-Obi-Won was put on a mining ship and someone told him about a box that had a broken circle, he checked out and discovered it was an explosive box from Off World.

Setting 1.Bandomeer 2.Bandomeer,meeting room,mid day 3.storage area,night 4. storage area,morning 5. mining ship,noon 6. in one of Bandomeers cores,night

Characters 1.Qui-Gon Jinn 2.Obi-Wan Kenobi 3.Xanatos 4.Si Treemba

The conflict is Xanatos is planning to blow up Bandomeer with the help Obi-Wan but Obi-Wan senses the trouble and goes to Qui-Gon about plan.

The climax is when Obi-Wan finds the box that has the broken circle and is kidknapped.

I learned that if I do not deal with my anger it can grow stronger, we must learn to forgive.

The story ends with Qui-Gon rescueing Obi-Wan and he spares Xanatous life and he runs off.

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